Thursday, May 21, 2009
Epic Simile. :) Lets Swim!!
As he stepped out onto the long wet, plastic board, waiting as the cheering grew and the butterflies in his stomach more so. His feet left the board, nothing but air surrounded his tight body, crawling for the dive. Excitement ripping through him then finally cutting into the water. Under for only seconds but he knew what was done, slowly coming up the butterflies still there anticipating his score, he had proudly taken first.
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I loved this! I could see the picture form in my head as i read on. Great job!
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